I am a year 6 student and a school leader at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 5 and in the Kahikatea hub and my teachers are Whea Sharlee and Whea Tamzin.This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Great effort Leslie. I enjoyed reading your writing. You used good describing words to set the mood of your writing, like 'the water is raging'. I have been to Huka falls and it is noisy and raging! I agree that it feels like you might fall when peering over the side.
Great effort Leslie. I enjoyed reading your writing. You used good describing words to set the mood of your writing, like 'the water is raging'. I have been to Huka falls and it is noisy and raging! I agree that it feels like you might fall when peering over the side.
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