I am a year 6 student and a school leader at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 5 and in the Kahikatea hub and my teachers are Whea Sharlee and Whea Tamzin.This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Your writing is fantastic Leslie, I can really see and understand how your character felt and how scary situations in war would be. I really enjoyed your ending, "I shouldn't worry too much about the past and focus on the future". Such a positive and thoughtful way to end it, Excellent work.
Your writing is fantastic Leslie, I can really see and understand how your character felt and how scary situations in war would be. I really enjoyed your ending, "I shouldn't worry too much about the past and focus on the future". Such a positive and thoughtful way to end it, Excellent work.
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