I am a year 6 student and a school leader at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 5 and in the Kahikatea hub and my teachers are Whea Sharlee and Whea Tamzin.This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Leslie, the poster you created is set out well to show your audience exactly how much sugar is in different foods. I like how you used healthy foods too. I enjoyed reading your advice on eating healthy. Next time you make a poster I want you to think about the layout. So where would be the most striking and clear place to have your writing and your pictures so your picture is well balanced. Keep up the fantastic work Leaslie.
Hi Leslie, the poster you created is set out well to show your audience exactly how much sugar is in different foods. I like how you used healthy foods too. I enjoyed reading your advice on eating healthy. Next time you make a poster I want you to think about the layout. So where would be the most striking and clear place to have your writing and your pictures so your picture is well balanced. Keep up the fantastic work Leaslie.
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