I am a year 6 student and a school leader at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 5 and in the Kahikatea hub and my teachers are Whea Sharlee and Whea Tamzin.This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Your Lorde poster looks really cool. Your facts are nice and informative and the images give your post lots of visual interest. Remember that I really want to hear what you think in your own words, be careful not to copy-paste things from the internet, including their spelling mistakes. The scroll and photo frame look really nice and add a lot of flavour to your post.
Also Remember to attribute the images you use by writing or hyperlinking where you got them from to get maximum points next week.
I’m really looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Hey Leslie,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Your Lorde poster looks really cool. Your facts are nice and informative and the images give your post lots of visual interest. Remember that I really want to hear what you think in your own words, be careful not to copy-paste things from the internet, including their spelling mistakes. The scroll and photo frame look really nice and add a lot of flavour to your post.
Also Remember to attribute the images you use by writing or hyperlinking where you got them from to get maximum points next week.
I’m really looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel